Some people say that self -empolyment is better than working for a company or institution. Discuss both points of view. What is your opinion?
With the steady growth in modernisation, the lifestyles of people have been greatly a affected. They have achieved various milestones; however, some issues remain unchallenged and as complex as ever. One such issue here is of self -empolyment. The particular topic asserts that which occupation is better; self- empolyment or company? Through this essay, I shall explore the dimensions if this topic and shape up my opinion by the end.
On one side, there is a group of people who believe that self -empolyment. They strengthen their viewpoint by claiming that flexible working hours. As their wish, any individual do to working on their own company. Furthermore, in any time,they go to the own institution.However, people closed their company in any time. A good illustration is this in private school. This school depend on one authority, and one person handle the time magement.
Contrary to this, there is an opposing group of people who believe that in working under a company. To make their argument convincing they claim that in fixed salaries. If any person doing work under a company then they are requires good wages. As well as , employees have not more responsibilties. Then, they are doing work on his particular occupation. Government school would be the perfect example. Government teachers takes good salaries.
Nevertheless, weighing both the option, I believe that there is no single conclusion. Still, I take this ground that an effective clap requires both use of hands depend on people their willing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19433198381 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98728825677 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587044534413 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.7853161556 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.15 106.682146367 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.35 20.7667163134 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.65 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164407188858 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463776287071 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451741483345 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971974496637 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276447944397 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.93 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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