Nowadays, people discuss if youths should have a casual job, which could help them to well behave and teach them a work etiquette, while others, would not like to see teens at work in their spare time. This essay will discuss both points of this interesting topic which divides our society into two groups.
Undoubtedly, teens life is the best part of a life, when everything is possible, time is timeless and only one responsibility is a school. Independence at the young stage of our lives is crucial, as we spent most of our lives at work after we graduate from school. Young people should use their spare time to socialise with their peers, travel to explore new cultures and habits. This stage of the life is creating our personality for upcoming adult life and nobody wanna be adult when he or she is fifteen.
Nevertheless, our society changed over the ages and many teenagers lost respect to authorities and seem their guardians as a cash machine. In fact, many youths spending their time in dark sites of cities, involved in a crime and other illegal activities. Part-time job position for teens could help our public in reducing crime and improving the behaviour of our children. For instance, our grandparents had a mandatory job after school and percentage of illegal activities was unnoticeable.
To summarise, there is no right answer or opinion on this topic. Parents should discuss with their kid if he or she would like to experience “how to make a money” and become part of an adult life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nevertheless, so, well, while, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85440613027 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64766205459 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0966037213 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.583333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239166519483 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784916175118 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044407303311 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141625558002 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371427823638 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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