In India and even in many parts of other countries, Television is one of the oldest source of entertainment. It has a great influence and acts as a timepass not only on children but even on the old age people. They see spiritual programs, daily soaps, news and whatever they like that too in national and vernacular languages. People are also addicted to television these days.
Here, it is argued, whether watching television is influencing behavior of children or the amount of time spent watching television influences children’s behaviors ? Television is a chatter box with lots of thing to entertain. It can be knowledgeable or it can be just a time pass. All depends on what is the children watching. Mainly children like watching cartoons which I believe is important for the development of brain and also acts a topic for conversation amoung peers. But there are few cartoons like shinchan which shows little vulgarity. So it’s the duty of parents to teach their children what should be seen and what is right. children are in their developing age therefore parents here plays an important role in observing what is their child learning from the cartoons or other shows on T.V.
Furthermore, many children sits with their parents or grandparents and spend hours in watching daily soaps. Which has very bad influence on children. Few serials which are based on history or teaches religious lessons like in India Chandragupta Morya, Jhansi ki Rani LaxmiBai, Mahabharat, Ramayan, Movie telecasts like chak de india, Bhagat Singh, Milkha singh. Channels like discovery, all these if seen, have good influence on children because even if child is spending 3 hours in watching it then in return he/she is gaining something valuable and knowledgeable.
Moreover, Spending hours on television and having no physical activity makes children couch potato. They are less social and remains introvert. It’s important to go out in open air and make friends. Along with all this having perfect balance to study curriculum as well as some out of course books like some story books or novels is also very important in today’s competitive world.
Thus, to recapitulate, and in my opinion, It’s true that television and they time spent on watching television influences children behavior but I believe that what is being watch plays the most significant and vital role on their behavior. Therefore, the primary responsibility is of parents and family members to keep a watch on what is their children learning and teach them how to have a perfect balance of outdoor activities & indoor activities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, of course, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2196.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 426.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15492957746 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86383414089 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528169014085 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 665.1 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.4184113596 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.571428571 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380433973574 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103557534435 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114151030139 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205936109682 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115568046283 0.056905535591 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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