Some people say that what children watch on TV influences their behaviour while others say the amount of time children they spend watching Tv influences their behavior. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People hold different views about the impacts of television on their teenage offspring. While some argue that programs are often associated with children’s behaviors, others may concur that length of time watching television is the contributing factor. My essay will shed lights on both sides of these argument before my opinion is given.
On the one hand, television content is responsible for shaping children’s view for cogent reasons. Besides informative channels which provide children a grasp of knowledge about surrounding lives, there are part of programs which are considered inappropriate for their ages. Since children are not capable of identifying what is right and wrong, chances are that they would try to mimic what is depicted on the screen even detrimental one. For example, violence in movies shows children poor examples of manner which arouses the potential of committing serious crime in the future.
On the other hand, it is often the case that how much time spent on television exerts some effects on youngsters’ behavior. Excessive drawn by TV shows might cause them to spend hours of their day with their eyes glued to the television screen. This tendency may result in lack of communication between children and their family as well as less taking part in outdoor activities which are vital for a child’s well-being and development.
In my opinion from the above analysis, both what children watch and how much time they spend watching television can impact their behavior. This is because, TV programs are incapable of forming children’s perception without their repetition. The more children watch TV, the more significant the effect is on their personality and behaviors.
In conclusion, deciding what to watch on TV or how much time that children should experience are concerning problems that may cause positive or negative impact.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this argument' or 'these arguments'?
Suggestion: this argument; these arguments
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ch time that children should experience are concerning problems that may cause positive or neg...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, may, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30872483221 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79947037274 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573825503356 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9194724641 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368292878711 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128805008411 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781464804874 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214220037944 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0953092537814 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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