in an information age, we can see the trend that more and more people spend a lot of time living in the virtual world. Most obviously, we need look no further then the popularization of computer game to see that. Some people question that whether gaming bring any useful skill or just a waste of time. Others, however, have convincing argued that playing electronic game play an important part on information accessing and socialization and so on, in this days and age. Speaking from personal experience, I think the best approach is moderation.
Let us consider the pros of computer game. On one hand, game, as a kind of competition, allows players to have a connection with each other, which may lead to a deeper communication, and that is a good way to make new friends or fix a deeper relationship. On the other hand, a quality game's always set a background accord with the real world in many aspects. When people playing in such scenery their mindset get improved to address problems in daily life. So surely there is a value playing computer games.
To be fair, however, when sit in front of the monitor, we need not only to be careful not to spend too much time on it, but also cautious to questionable and violence content which are sometimes set to hook players, and have a negative impact to both individuals and societies. What is more, when come to electronic games, we cannot neglect its attraction to children, as young people is the most important market, and always impressionable. for example, students addict with computer games may spend the most of their time in front of a monitor after school, and when back to school they will be too tired to pay attention on what teachers say. That is what parents warry about, and remind us that electronic game's development and marketing need to be limited.
So the bottom line is that computer games have pros and cons. For adults who have certain self-control, the advantages of games usually out weight its disadvantages. But we still need to set tough boundaries and make sure the content our children are viewing is appropriate, in case that game producers may overdo in order to hook teenagers. Most things in moderation are healthy, and video games are no different.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, still, then, for example, i think, kind of, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1856.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77120822622 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73684162367 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562982005141 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.7553166602 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.111111111 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6111111111 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331108152638 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973715221698 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604630373637 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185427949113 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488559514693 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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