To some people studying the past has little value in the modern world. Why do you think it is important to do so? What will be the effect if children are not taught history?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
new Roman","serif";mso-ascii-theme-font: major-bidi;mso-hansi-theme-font:major-bidi;mso-bidi-theme-font:major-bidi">studying history is one of the most prominent jobs in the life that unfortunately, lots of people are not engrossed in it. according to some reasons, it can be claimed that not paying enough attention to it is a fault.
new Roman","serif";mso-ascii-theme-font: major-bidi;mso-hansi-theme-font:major-bidi;mso-bidi-theme-font:major-bidi"> The first reason that can clarify the issue is that, knowing some events in the past can affect people’s decisions in the future. For instance, evaluating some people’s mistakes in the past can teach new generation enormous things in different fields such as medicine, art and science. Besides, using the results that are relevant to the past, speeds up the rate of progressing in all majors. For example, electricity was invented in the past and after that with the passage of time, people used this head start to think about manufacturing electrical automobiles.
new Roman","serif";mso-ascii-theme-font: major-bidi;mso-hansi-theme-font:major-bidi;mso-bidi-theme-font:major-bidi"> Moving onto the next reason that is worth considering, teaching history to children has a crucial effect on their lives. For example, imagine a race of people whose previous generation attacked to another group of people and killed lots of them, without caring about justice. As a matter of fact, knowing about these events can motivate new children to enhance their reputation. In addition, perusing history of whole the world and analyzing experiences, can open lots of doors in children’s lives because according to a hypothesis, communities in different countries, have different talents. So studying history can make children absorbed in new aspects of all fields.
new Roman","serif";mso-ascii-theme-font: major-bidi;mso-hansi-theme-font:major-bidi;mso-bidi-theme-font:major-bidi"> To sum up, although some people are not enthusiastic about studying history, it has a vital role in anybody’s life and can help people to progress in the life rapidly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a matter of fact, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1909.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.81785714286 5.12529762239 133% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 10.9301066849 2.80592935109 390% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553571428571 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.1 1.60771543086 131% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.4291156708 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.083333333 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0867378568923 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531768905125 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0242957342099 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0678863434471 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291766012871 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.4 13.0946893788 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 5.83 50.2224549098 12% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.2 11.3001002004 161% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 22.57 12.4159519038 182% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.