Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.
the issue states that some people think all universities should study whatever they like and some others believe that they should only study subjects that will be useful in the future such as those related to science and technology. i support to the statement that all university students should study whatever they like because it depends upon student interest we should not force others to study only the restricted subjects because they may have their goals in their life other than engineering and doctor or any related to technology.
secondly some students likes to do hotel managemnt,poetry,bussiness,arts and crafts,and there are many other jobs which are not related to science and technology . students study properly when they do what they like.but if we force them to study unlike of their interest then they will lose their life nad goals . students cannot study the subjects in which they are not interested.
thirdly india developed in technological and science but not at all developed or developing the arts side but in other countries students are left by parents at certain age to earn and study on their own in their interest so that they know what the life is . because life is not only knowing about the subjects in the college but includes all other matters.
finally a student should take his own decision and study whatever they want but they should not be forced to study only the subjects subjects only give us certificates but others gives us knowledge of the society and everything .studing only a subject is not at all enough to a student .they should study whatever they like.
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- Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future such as those related to science and technology 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9557195572 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87796112511 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472324723247 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.7742044459 49.4020404114 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.875 106.682146367 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.875 20.7667163134 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.652857254136 0.244688304435 267% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.316681375444 0.084324248473 376% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.223908975443 0.0667982634062 335% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.415722276921 0.151304729494 275% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.198715313662 0.056905535591 349% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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