People have different views about the advance education systems should be supported by authorities, while some argue that it is would be better for the student to feed the tuition themselves. While I am in favor of the former opinion, I am going to delve into both views in this essay.
On the one hand, there are a large amout of benefits if students in a higher class that are paid the school fee by the government. Firstly, in general, the tuition in the higher class is much more than a lower education system therefor citizens may have more chances to join in the advanced class. Secondly, in some developed countries, the student has to take out a bank loan for studying universities, if they save a part budget from the support of the government they can reduce the amount of students' debt and help them put more attention in their study.
On the other hand, the downsides of tuition remission are varied, From some people's perspective, it is true that the payment for the student will press the burden on the national budget, hence, the government has to put the higher tax on some fields. Moreover, students may take the school's fees for granted seem to be not responsible adequate for their study, it led the output education quality lower.
In conclusion, to harmony between the advantages and the drawback of this foundation, personally, I think the government should only reduce the cost of education,increase the scholarship for prominent students, or free tuition for underprivileged students instead of remission on a whole scale
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...tuition remission are varied, From some peoples perspective, it is true that the paymen...
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Line 4, column 162, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , increase
...should only reduce the cost of education,increase the scholarship for prominent students,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, as to, i think, in conclusion, in general, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.875 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80464480531 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564393939394 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.2982340879 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.875 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 20.7667163134 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.875 7.06120827912 253% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273161562076 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114765188457 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598437070978 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16274577324 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692168733197 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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