Some people thing that the poor children will be the successful people more easily than the rich one because of many difficulties that they face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people opine that the youth in the low position achieve the success easier than the wealthy on as facing their troubles. Individually, I partly concur with this statement. And this essay will address the reasons for my views as follow.
As the foremost, a large number of advocates are inclined towards the fact that the rich children have more supports by their finance strengths, this is because their parents willing and full qualified to spend money to help their offspring add different competencies, paving the way to their glory. Besides that, the wealthy family are a collection of people who have been successful, they had experiences about that and to maintain their opulent, transferring these from generation to generation is a necessity. For instance, the younger people receive the all-round instructions and capacities, which are provided by their family’s investment in extra classes, teachers, advance curriculum; therefore, the sapling could further numerous traditions and knowledge as well to widen the horizons that shape and enhance basis to achieve the best performance and career.
Notwithstanding, it is factual that the juvenile who comes from low-status family have more necessary life skills and problem solving abilities as their experience in facing difficulties. Moreover, living in miserable environment becomes the effective motivations to hard-working for finding suitable chances to change their moment life. Specifically, these children at early age living in poverty are obligate to work for earning money to help their family, by their amount of time exposed to different social classes and the experience gained from requiring to growing up early, it plays a crucial role to apply and develop to achieve success.
In brief, it is a common belief that the success is achieved by the young people in low class easier than the rich ones. From my perspectives, the accomplishment is rewarded by the youth aware the key of trying and efforts regardless of family background.
- Some people thing that the poor children will be the successful people more easily than the rich one because of many difficulties that they face To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- Some people thing that the poor children will be the successful people more easily than the rich one because of many difficulties that they face To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 231, Rule ID: AS_FOLLOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'as follows'?
Suggestion: as follows
...y will address the reasons for my views as follow. As the foremost, a large number of ...
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Line 2, column 19, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...my views as follow. As the foremost, a large number of advocates are inclined towards the fact...
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Line 3, column 404, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'obligated'.
Suggestion: obligated
...dren at early age living in poverty are obligate to work for earning money to help their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for instance, in brief
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36163522013 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9021409299 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591194968553 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.4365076099 49.4020404114 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.0 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9090909091 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140433002815 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570645808947 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593810183011 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961080200367 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358488777481 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.4 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.