Some people think the air travel should be restricted because it causes environment pollution. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and relevant examples.
Transportation modes have shrunk this world into a small village. Presently, the quality of environment is being degraded by the air pollution. Therefore, some people are of the opinion that it is necessary to impose the restriction over air travel in order to curtail the amount of contamination. Here, i would like to disaccord with the given statement.
There are multifarious points to endorse my view. First and foremost, air travels are lucrative to promote commercialisation, social dealings and business network worldwide. For instance, people of different countries travel to other nations...
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: Here, i would like to disaccord with the given statement.
Error: disaccord Suggestion: discord
Sentence: First and foremost, air travels are lucrative to promote commercialisation, social dealings and business network worldwide.
Error: commercialisation Suggestion: No alternate word
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 346 350
No. of Characters: 1872 1500
No. of Different Words: 217 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.313 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.41 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.023 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 152 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 129 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 83 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 56 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.476 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.566 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.524 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.248 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.487 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.028 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 305, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...tail the amount of contamination. Here, i would like to disaccord with the given ...
^
Line 3, column 613, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...he flow of exchanging goods and it will effect adversely to the gross domestic product...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...oduct, progress as well as economy. Further emphasizing on my point of view, reduci...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 309, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'clearing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: clearing
...he development of new airports requires to clear the land which is a serious issue. Thus...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1932.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5838150289 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15496285839 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618497109827 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1698864088 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4761904762 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200255827144 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495082684737 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639371347303 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101104547726 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610132312892 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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