Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help local community.
The believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole.
Do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, with the development of advanced technology, it is irrefutable that information technology plays an integral part of human life, especially in their work. thanks to information technology, people nowadays can work everywhere they want instead of arriving at their workspace like the conventional way, which brings lots of its enormous benefits for people. From my perspective, besides the positive aspects, I also believe that in some cases, people work outside the office and do not have to go to a workspace may have detrimental effects.
it is unambiguous that one of the most drawbacks is the lack of connection between the coworkers. For instance, if people just use smart means to work without going to a meeting in the workspace, they may communicate less and discuss with their colleagues. Consequently, people do not have opportunities to exchange arguments face to face with others. besides, people who work in their own space, may not have enough attention to complete their work. it can easily be seen that many distractions can interrupt people if they work without direct supervision such as their boss.
Despite these negative, people being able to work everywhere they want by using information technology has an essential role in the efficiency of work. it is indisputable that it is very convenient for workers to work in every case. Employees can complete tasks even though they are absent from the workday. There are so many ways to submit their work before the deadline speedily by using information technology. Another benefit is that businesses do not waste lots of electricity, which saves energy resources. In my own opinion, while working everywhere by using smart means such as modern methods or websites, which makes people do not have to spend much time to arrive at the workspace, may have downside aspects, the advantages of this way of working outweigh the opposite side.
In conclusion, thanks to the invention of the improvement of information technology, people can easily work in a modern and effective way which enables workers to work without spending time in the office. As far as I am concerned, all workers must access to the way of working without arriving at the workspace because the advantages of this method outweigh the negative influences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Thanks
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Suggestion: It
...pace may have detrimental effects. it is unambiguous that one of the most dra...
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Suggestion: Besides
...nge arguments face to face with others. besides, people who work in their own space, ma...
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Suggestion: It
...nough attention to complete their work. it can easily be seen that many distractio...
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...sential role in the efficiency of work. it is indisputable that it is very conveni...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, if, may, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1945.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13192612137 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8725330832 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506596306069 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 615.6 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9025451625 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.5625 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6875 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191495040675 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693868791416 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346159480142 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130812387335 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221873711764 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.