Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, there a great number of courses in tertiary education. While, some people held that scholars should independently choose subjects for study, others argue they need to be directed in useful curriculums such as science or technology. While there are numerous subjects in institutions, I believe that students should select them by their preference.
Students who have chosen their curriculum independently can succeed in their further career. Indeed, coming from future job sector an applicant select referral to universities. For example, while enrollee wants to become a biologist, he or she might not be studying history, also, no one can change his or her mind. Next, while student enter at the institution they will thirst to gain knowledge rather than those who guided to select a subject. Moreover, these students will self-motivated and have thought that they can be the best professional.
It can be true that there are also subjects such as science and technology which can be useful in student’s life. As well as technology improves youth should know to deal with high tech gadgets. Furthermore, graduating science faculty might allow well-paid or job opportunities. However, if every student learns these subjects, humans will have issue with lacking professionals in other spheres. Also, if there is demand on a particular curriculum, entrant numbers might increase and exams will challenging. To sum up, while there is a choice in selecting university curriculum between individual and directed, due to additional motivational spirit, I think entrant should select his or her study by preference.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 495, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'challenge'
Suggestion: challenge
...t numbers might increase and exams will challenging. To sum up, while there is a choice in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, i think, of course, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41501976285 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97597749703 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644268774704 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6500967507 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8571428571 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343717659941 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102653454967 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807709659071 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234416902467 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405067846017 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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