some people think that the best way to gather information is through news paper while others believe in other
Several people think that the best way to gather information is through newspapers while others believe that other ways are better.
I think why some people think newspapers are the best way to gather information because newspapers provide a variety of information from politics, sports, advertisements, accident news and various events that have been held or not. However, it is possible that this opinion or view is expressed by people who subscribe to or frequently read newspapers every day without looking at other media as the main source of information. this can be a trigger for readers to think that newspapers are the best way as a source of information.
Although, there are other ways that are better than reading the newspaper. This is because in the modern era information sources can be obtained from anywhere without a late deadline. For example, reading from the news web, social media, YouTube, television and other online media without having to rely on newspapers as the main source of information. so many people think there are more avenues as sources of information.
Howeverless information can be obtained from anywhere without exception. whether from newspapers or other media. this depends on both sides of the reader and the connoisseur of information is more comfortable getting information through what source. Therefore, all the information obtained determines the reader in providing assumptions, views and facts about the source. so that each reader has a different point of view from the others in illustrating what has been obtained from each information media.
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| 2021-12-14 | Agus Ismansyah | 56 | view |
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- Improvements in health education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations However the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas To what extent do you agree or disagree w 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, therefore, while, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30588235294 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89417078436 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482352941176 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6475309731 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.076923077 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384482525235 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152957186469 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.166470880476 0.0667982634062 249% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.321655602969 0.151304729494 213% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.218047960522 0.056905535591 383% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.