Some people think that the best way to get the news is through newspapers while others think it is through online media.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, there are a lot of sources where people can know the news. According to some people, reading newspapers is the best practice to keep yourself updated about your surroundings while some believe digital platforms/electronic media are the best source of news. In my opinion, both newspaper and online media are good sources to get the news. Further paragraphs will be dedicated to the details of these views and the balanced approach will also be discussed.
On the first hand, reading a newspaper is one of the oldest and efficient ways to get news. Newspapers have an approach to a very wide range of audiences as they can be accessed by anyone who can read. In the current time, people of old age group rely on newspapers rather than any other resources like digital platforms because reading newspaper is part of their daily routine from childhood and switching to electronic media is challenging for them as most of the elderly people don't know how to use latest smartphones and computers. For example, in villages or rural areas, most people prefer reading newspapers as they find it more comfortable than e-news.
On the other hand, electronic media is considered the best source of news by most people living in metropolitan cities. In this modern era of technology, the mode of communication is shifted from paper to electronic mediums, there are more e-letters, e-mails, and e-messages now. People prefer to access almost every piece of information online. People who are literate enough to use smartphones and computers prefer online media as they get a wide range of news channels in their preferred languages. Electronic media is also advantageous as it provides live updates. For example, mobile applications like google news reflect a pop-up message on the mobile screen for any breaking news.
To summarise, I believe that, for people of old age group newspapers are the best ways to get news as most of them have challenges in using smartphones or computers to access e-media while for youngsters and city people digital platforms are always a better place for news.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, while, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1758.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06628242075 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84511755789 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495677233429 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.649819528 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.2 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1333333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273011757937 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102035482867 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079459252241 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184479645179 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538010713403 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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