Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences others however, believe that are better alternative ways of reducing crime .Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Right to reduce crime activitiesc in the world often wonder whether they ought to longer prison or otherway implement to curb crime while many people believe that giving a punishment long time in prison will be the best way to guarantee a control crime .others claim that some alternate method to reducing crime is the best option.
Giving long prison is the best way according to those people who believe that crime can reduce by that punishment. Firstly, by long prison stringent punishment to criminal it can be help to make good person and change habit of crime. As a result, they will be afraid from death penalty law and would not do step again crime. This may lead to controlling dangerous crime such as murder and terroristes attack. For instance, in Mumbai city of India where terrorist were attack on taj hotel and afterwards they get death penalty prison, thats why it's best epitome in opinion of those people who say that longer prison is the best option to control crime.
However, others claim that there are several methods to mend crime without long punishment, if government will be make buraueaue intelligence company those may provide awareness and education to unqualified people about criminal activities and organize seminars in university to teach youngone. Consequently, they will be easily aware captivating towards crime such as robbery, pickpocket and get succcesful career. This may lead to increase qualified people in world and decrease crime roots.
In conclusion, both factors have own implications, I believe that to reduce crime is the best way authorities can controlling issues which responsible to increase crime rate in society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13919413919 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63084257142 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.1087963827 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.3 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403064975487 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165884394412 0.084324248473 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141494368674 0.0667982634062 212% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273297624487 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117398819616 0.056905535591 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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