Some people think that car is the best way to travel in the cities. However, other say that bicycle is more lucrative than cars. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The lifestyle of masses has undergone dramatic changes over the couple of decades. Presently, some people assert that cars are the supreme method of travel in the cities. By contrast, others believe that travelling by bicycles is worthwhile idea as compare to travel by cars. Here, I would like to account for both sides of view in my own perception.
There are manifold points to shore up the former view. First and foremost, people can save their precious time if they travel by cars in the cities. To justify, people can cover long distance under the less amount of time by travelling the car with its fastest speed. Therefore, traveling by cars allows masses to manage their time to devote on others responsibilities. Besides this, car is luxury, comfortable and entertaining mode of travelling and therefore people have tendancy to travel in cities by car. For example, cars not only provide supreme sitting arrangment, music and air conditioning but also contains power steering, break, air bags and so on which contribute remarkably to prevent people from sunlight, dust etc. As a result, travelling by cars in cities provide comfort and safe mode for masses.
Numerous points can be put down to endorse the latter view. Initially, eco-friendly mode for masses and environment. To demonstrate, bicycle does not need to consume a large amount of natural resources such as diesel, petrol and gas which are perilous for our fresh environment. What is more, travelling by bicycles is phenomenal to decline contamination, gridlocks, crowd and accidents. Besides this, travelling in cities by bicycles are fruitful for the health of masses. Consquently, to preserve environment and prevent people from health issues so that bicycle is lucrative mode of travelling into cities.
To recapitulate, undeniably, cars have more features and comfort but we can not neglect downside of this trend. Therefore, from my own prospective, bicycle is more lucrative than cars.
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Suggestion:
... Initially, eco-friendly mode for masses and environment. To demonstrate, bicycle...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, so, therefore, while, for example, such as, as a result, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20504731861 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86940728964 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555205047319 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3751753283 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8421052632 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6842105263 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26315789474 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330869462607 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103262821149 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641061120925 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198589420911 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434993250786 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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