Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Others think they should begin after 7 years of age.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is often discussed by some that, schooling started at an early age would be more beneficial than they turn to age seven while others oppose the statement. However, in my opinion, it is better to begin regular education after three years due to the facts of enhanced foundation, and better development.
On the one hand, people who argued about later education think that which would provide children to get more freedom and be free from academic pressure. Today's study materials and content make stress and mental conflicts to the children. Many children show detrimental effects related to studies and homework because they could not get enough time for leisure activities. Furthermore, children who turn seven might enjoy more time with their peers and family members which flourish their overall growth and development. For instance, parental support throughout the daytime and care from siblings would cherish the relationship and they felt
more security than anything.
On the other hand, education during the year of three years would be the perfect time to make basement and foundation of real teaching. Children's overall brain development would enhance up to the year of three so after this time they get more motivation and spirit to socialise and be with the peer groups. Such connections would expand the inborn talents and an opportunity to be a part of the team and society. For example, nursery students often express more bonds between the teachers and nursery mates to convey feelings than parents. Moreover, nowadays nuclear families and working parents do not have sufficient time to stay with the children which may lead to child abuse and feeling of loneliness. Such pernicious effects also inhibit if children start formal education in the early years.
To conclude, there are numerous benefits when education started at age seven. Even though in my perspective, if children got proper education from the age of three would cherish not only the academic performance but also physical and mental sustainability.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23780487805 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60248016974 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8173111524 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.533333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227212849718 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733778913381 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555400846554 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120898314448 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0835102501979 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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