Some people think that children should learn to compete, but others think that children should be taught to co-operate so that they could become more useful adults. State some reasons for both views and give your opinion.
Individuals have distinct viewpoints concerning the question of whether children should be taught to compete or to cooperate. While several people believe that learners should be taught by competing, I believe that pupils who should be taught about cooperation instead.
On the one hand, there are some reasons for teaching the ability to compete. Firstly, students have motivation for learning, and they strived for their scores. For instance, in class, children achieve a reward so they must study hard to have the best academic achievements. Even they are spent time at school and the library more than at home. This a result, this gives them an advantage when enrolling in tertiary education or a prestigious university. Secondly, it helps their career progress to a high position. Therefore, they have financial stability or even a brighter future.
On the other hand, individuals have their strengths and weaknesses. Therefore, when they are taught to cooperate, they could learn from each other. This is due to the fact that nobody is flawless, so it helps them minimize imperfection from those situations. As a result, it could lead to an improvement in performance and enhancement in teamwork. Besides, when they are taught to cooperate, interpersonal skills enhance themselves, and they learn how to settle the dispute. Consequently, they can establish harmonious relationships in their lives, which could lead to pros and cons for their career. For example, If they have a good relationship, they will have the opportunity to the investment in their fields.
In conclusion, there are several reasons individuals should be taught to compete or cooperate. From my perspective, I prefer the opinion that should be taught to cooperate.
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- The maps bellow show changes experienced by the town of Lakeside at the beginning of the 21st century. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- Some people think that children should learn to compete, but others think that children should be taught to co-operate so that they could become more useful adults. State some reasons for both views and give your opinion. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 49, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
...als have distinct viewpoints concerning the question of whether children should be taught to compete or...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34657039711 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98131128388 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548736462094 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.404006957 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.2777777778 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3888888889 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61111111111 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28642103923 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879990358425 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605826255858 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178239130745 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295324343643 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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