Some people think that children should learn paint or draw at school and other believe it just a waste of time discuss both view and give ur opinion.
"Art is the most Intense mode of individualism that the world has known". Art is play a crucial and vital role in our life. With the growth of modernization, one of the most pressing concerns regarding to the given topic is art. The particular topic asserts that children should learn to paint or draw at school or not? Through this essay, I shall explore the dimensions of this topic and shape of my opinion by the end.
On one side there is a group of people who believe that, children should learn to paint or draw at school. They bolster to their view point by claiming that it is extra curricular activities like painting or drawing. It Also increase the creativity of children as well as children can able to know about their hidden talent. It does not only increase their skills but also very beneficial in their future.
on the flip side the opposing group of people who believe that, it is just a waste of time they make their argument convincing they claim that this is become a mentality of the society. People says that it does not have any scope in the future because they consider other fields are more beneficial than this feild. Particularly the best episode of this topic is that the survey was conducted the Hindustan Time which reveals that only 2 out of 10 people was found success in the art as compared to other fields. That's why people do not prefer that, their chlidren will go in this field.
In conclusion nevertheless weighing both the options I believe that, there is a no single conclusion, still I take this ground that an effective clap required the use of hand, it depends on the children whether they go for drawing and painting or not at the school.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, still, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60197368421 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46475985005 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549342105263 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9712480855 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9285714286 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275071827257 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930241299092 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113715098873 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155546332707 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339728551828 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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