It is debated whether cities are the best places to live than countryside. This essay will consider the benefits and drawbacks of living in the city than in rural area.
Some people said that living in the city is the best decision because it provides a lot of facilities and comfort that can improve our quality of life and future. For instance, cities usually offer better opportunity in finding job, and better quality in medication access and education. Finding job will much easier in cities because a lot of business and office are located in the cities. As we can see, most of start up companies and small business center are built in cities. Moreover, better quality in medication access and education are provided in cities. A lot of health center, clinics, or even hospitals that have more medical equipment supporting advance diagnostic are also provided in cities. Additionally, many schools in cities had adopted improved curricula that open bigger opportunity in improving our knowledge.
On the other hand, rural areas also have positive site that cities can not provided such as more fresh air and calm atmosphere and less stress. The low levels on air pollution due to vehicles emission will make those living in rural area are much healthier. In addition, lower workload will make people in rural area unexposed to stress. A survey results comparing happiness level of residents in cities and countryside in Indonesia revealed that the countryside inhabitants had less stress level and healthier lung function. They said that they could feel their life better in villages even they earned less money.
In conclusion, although both living in cities and rural areas have its advantage and disadvantages, cities will promise us better opportunity and quality of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14383561644 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60880691548 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537671232877 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.895263517 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.133333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282512936804 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102103671741 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952908953461 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21325893878 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0819244956832 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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