Some people think cities are not good places for children to grow up in and they would have a better childhood in the countryside. Do you agree or disagree?
One of the most controversial issue today relates to where our children can have their better childhood experience. I strongly agree that the life in the country side can make a great impact towards the younger years. In this essay, I am going to examine the situation and give my opinion from both points of view.
On one side of the argument, there are parents who argue that the benefits of a child living in urban areas can make a significant change on their children’s upbringing. It is known to many that cities are equipped with modern facilities and quality education that is being taught by qualified professionals to improve and instill a significant knowledge to children. Moreover, there are variety of recreational and educational places a child can go to. For instance, a zoo which consists of wide diversity of animals, can be a place where a family can spend quality time together.
On the other hand, I strongly agree that upbringing in the country side considerably outweigh than those who live in the cities. First, it is generally acknowledged that living in a healthy environment plays a substantial role in the lives of many especially to the youth. During this vulnerable stage, children must be well secured and isolated to the pollutants brought up by vehicles and industrial plantations to prevent from diseases. Second, I believe that building friendship is the best childhood experience a person can have. People are usually considered to be permanently residing in the suburban making the children in a community to have closer relationship with their neighbors. Thus, these closer ties develop trust and camaraderie during recreational activities creating a bond that will grow within them and it will form a deeper friendships leading to unforgettable moments.
In conclusion, although city life gives a vast amount of great opportunities, I strongly agree that living in a country side can provide a child healthier life as well as can establish relationships between children that contributes to the true meaning of a childhood experience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 332, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[4]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'significant knowledge'.
Suggestion: significant knowledge
...ed professionals to improve and instill a significant knowledge to children. Moreover, there are variet...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'still', 'thus', 'well', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'as well as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.252054794521 0.247107183377 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.153424657534 0.155533422707 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0794520547945 0.0946595960268 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0438356164384 0.0501214627716 87% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0383561643836 0.0437548338989 88% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12602739726 0.122226691241 103% => OK
Participles: 0.041095890411 0.0403226058552 102% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.02289221184 2.80594681477 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0356164383562 0.0326793684256 109% => OK
Particles: 0.0027397260274 0.00163938923432 167% => OK
Determiners: 0.109589041096 0.0861772015684 127% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0328767123288 0.021408717616 154% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0219178082192 0.011925033212 184% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2084.0 1933.35771543 108% => OK
No of words: 339.0 316.048096192 107% => OK
Chars per words: 6.14749262537 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.377581120944 0.374742101984 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.297935103245 0.28420135186 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.218289085546 0.203846283523 107% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.159292035398 0.137316102897 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02289221184 2.80594681477 108% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.037074148 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569321533923 0.56093040696 101% => OK
Word variations: 63.1232645553 60.7387585426 104% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.2142857143 20.7743622355 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8489269367 49.517814964 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.857142857 127.492653851 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2142857143 20.7743622355 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.928571428571 0.814263465372 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 54.0077960388 49.1944974215 110% => OK
Elegance: 1.77906976744 1.69124875643 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308805533956 0.332605444948 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0703139403544 0.102741220458 68% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0433216354026 0.0668466124924 65% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.538343929954 0.534860350844 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.149581221325 0.148594505496 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129375442741 0.134430193775 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054311603365 0.0742795772207 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.314858842357 0.324371583561 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0382080811553 0.0638462369009 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206446051916 0.228012699653 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683173397337 0.058150111329 117% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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