In today’s contemporary era businessmen use many tricks to augment profits over their competitors. Some people put forward the argument that weather change may impact business activities whereas others advise that changes in climate brings more opportunities for the business. While I believe that in some situations businesses have to face losses when climate changes, I also strongly agree that companies could be benefited from changing weather.
On the one hand, A few people view that changing weather conditions are harmful for business because of considerable reasons. Firstly, there are some business which depends upon weather conditions and only can be do in one or two seasons during a year. As a result, people who are doing seasonal business become unemployed during off seasons and faces loss. For example, snow removal services is a seasonal business which is possible during winter season but not in the summer. Secondly, due to challenging weather conditions companies have to bear higher insurance costs and other expenses in order to supply goods and products to end users. Moreover, To make sure the completion of order on time with right quantity and quality in bad weather is a big challenge for organizations and could damage the goodwill of the company. Consequently, instead of compromising with reputation of enterprise that takes long time to make in the minds of customer, companies pay more as they may increase prices because of shortage of stock. Finally, due to severe weather companies fail to get raw materials for producing finished products as during rainy season business encounter many problems in getting material on time or they have to spend more money on raw material that has least availability in the market. Therefore, climate changes are the big hinder-ship in the smooth running of business,
On the other hand, I opine that changing weather conditions provide some golden opportunities to business ventures. First of all, changing climates increases the effectiveness and efficiency of the business as there are some energy efficient business that needs less power to operate so companies could take benefits from these types of plants. Besides this, if there would be businesses based on solar energy then there will be more employments for people which will not only raise living standard of people but also enhances profitability of organizations. Apart from this, it is cost effective for agricultural bodies as well as for low income groups and brings numerous benefits.
To conclude, although it is viewed by some people that climate change brings negative effects for companies yet I think that it has some benefits which may leads to more advantages in short period of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, while, apart from, as for, for example, i think, in short, as a result, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2307.0 1615.20841683 143% => OK
No of words: 439.0 315.596192385 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25512528474 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76531018074 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53986332574 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 735.3 506.74238477 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.2042538176 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.1875 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4375 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.4375 7.06120827912 219% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354596832057 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120882769002 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102122583116 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261737487828 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579148096154 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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