Several people believe that some enterprises are being adversely affected by the implications of global warming while others consider it a business opportunity. In this essay, I aim to discuss to what extent both ideas are true and how they may vary according to the type of activities.
To begin with, it is important to underline some of the climate change repercussions in order to understand how certain businesses could be affected.
The keyword here is “extreme”. Some of the extreme weather manifestations such as strong winds, snow in unusual places, severe high temperatures in normally cold areas, and tropical rainforests burning due to similar reasons, are both dysfunctioning and creating new businesses at the same time.
That being said, it is obvious that activities developed in the leisure and recreational industry are more likely to be seriously affected by climate change.
For instance, skiing resorts could majorly reduce their working seasons due to the rapid melting of snow, while beach resorts may have problems with the excessive heat or cold that would push tourists away for too long periods of time. The fishing industry could be another business severely harmed by global warming as fishes and other marine life find it harder and harder to reproduce due to the increased water temperature and pollution.
On the other hand, companies that are undertaking activities to create renewable energies using wind and heat as power sources could flourish. The same goes for companies that consider water as a feasible source of energy. Moreover, climate change itself may produce new business opportunities to find solutions to keep it under control by, let’s say, cultivating more trees, or creating technologies to slow down the warming of the oceans at Poles.
In conclusion, although climate change has a negative impact on our world, that doesn’t stop people from creating new business ideas that will prosper and hopefully will lead to better solutions to our environmental problems.
- Some people think climate change has a negative impact on business while others think that it provides more business options Discuss both view and give your own opinion 78
- The advantages of robots doing the basic serving functions in the entertainment leisure and retail sectors of the economy outweigh the disadvantages To what extent do you agree with this statement Give your opinion Give reasons for your answer and include 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18322981366 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74071622101 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 322.0 20.2975951904 1586% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1669.0 106.682146367 1564% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 322.0 20.7667163134 1551% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 100.0 7.06120827912 1416% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217424273453 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.217424273453 0.084324248473 258% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106114964012 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409181868315 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 164.0 13.0946893788 1252% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -263.81 50.2224549098 -525% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 130.0 11.3001002004 1150% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.24 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 24.02 8.58950901804 280% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 9.78957915832 613% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 130.8 10.1190380762 1293% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 60.0 10.7795591182 557% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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