Some people think that competitive sports such as soccer can help to reach cultural interaction among people of different age groups and nationalities, but others think that it would cause problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In contemporary settings, the vast majority of people are impatiently waiting for sports events to happen in their countries. While some people believe that hosting such sports competition has been causing tension between different countries, I believe that such events have been bridging the gap among different nations.
It is true that conflicts among different countries may become worse during such events. This is mainly because some crazy fans of certain sport teams or sportsmen sometimes cannot digest the failure of their teams or athletes, and they may fight against the followers of other teams. For example, after the Russian football team was defeated by the French team in the 2016 European football game, angry Russian fans threw bottles at French fans in the night clubs and this led to serious fights. Hence, the French government decided to tighten the visa rules for Russian citizens, and this exerted adverse influence on the relationships between these two countries.
However, in most cases, holding international sports events has been playing an imperative role in promoting the relationships between different nations. During such events, foreign athletes and spectators have the opportunities of learn the culture and
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, so, while, for example, in most cases, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1045.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 193.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41450777202 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55513447399 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60103626943 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 193.0 20.2975951904 951% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1045.0 106.682146367 980% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 193.0 20.7667163134 929% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 74.0 7.06120827912 1048% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157291963473 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157291963473 0.084324248473 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120166630956 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749594651763 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 100.6 13.0946893788 768% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -124.42 50.2224549098 -248% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 78.6 11.3001002004 696% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.28 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.14 8.58950901804 200% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 79.2 10.1190380762 783% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 79.0 10.7795591182 733% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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