Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned,while other think people should be free to choose,discuss both views and give your opinion.
playing multifarious sports in this contemporary world. some adventures sports are also played today.because of which,some people believe that it cannot be done. However I am entirely convinced with people who think that restrictions should not be there.I will explain both views before making final note.
Several reasons are responsible for banning adventures sports. The first and foremost reason behind this case is occurring accidents. In simple terms,owing to dangerous sports,mankind may be harmed in numerous ways such as people lose their lives or being fractured. For instance, due to trying sports like sky diving,people have to lose their lives because of some systematic issues. Another most prominent factor is waste of money. In other words, the cost for dangerous sports is mostly enormous Consequently,it has absolutely major impact on people. Moreover, individuals try them for once. However,they have to pay too much. Thus, these points are supporting regarding monitoring such sports.
individual's choice also play vital role for this phenomena. The most indispensable factor for supporting this view is entertainment which is lead by such sports. To put it in another way, people feel tedious due to their frenetic lives. Because of which, in some cases adventures sports are crucial for enjoying. Another convincing factor that cannot be ignored is that such sports are useful for individuals who are suffering from any illness such as water phobias or fear due to heights. To exemplify, one of my best friend is struggling from water phobias. while after trying deepseadive,he has become normal like others. Therefore,owing to all these described reasons and for respecting people's private choice,i believe that mankind has right for adventures sports.
In conclusion,despite having several effective reasons for banning adventures sports,while I opine that it should be certainly chosen by people due to playing crucial role in their lives by dangerous sports such as for entertainment as well as for curing some illness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as for, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52215189873 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0076995544 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575949367089 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.9625720632 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0952380952 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0476190476 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90476190476 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225912342333 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605718208278 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751894969661 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174719174654 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826396962659 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.14 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.