Some people think the development of technology has made our life more complex and the solution is to live a simpler life without technology To what extent do you agree or disagree

Technology dominates the human life today. It has been inter woven in our routine life, there is a drastic change in each and every field due to Rapid advancement in technology. The fast placed development today is bringing a conforts and luxurious in life, but it also has some undesirable effects. I agree to the given statement and I came idea in the following paragraph.

Elementary, modern technology has drastically affect the way of Living. In the past time, some people were very trouble to makes some cooking process, but in these days is completely changed. However, it has been much more convenient in recent year by virtue of the microwave. Secondly, it has a big improvement in transportation sectors by new technology. In addition, the trains has completely different than before period as a lot of AC coach available in the trains which is provide a lot of facilities and people can cut the short distance in a short time.

Furthermore, in the Hustle and bustle place the life. I Caan said about the education facilities in todays, modern technology has entered in schools and colleges and makes modern infrastructure which does very attractive among the youngster. A strong example according to me this day is a student do not go to school during lockdown but they did studying online which can change their future life.

On the other hand, modern technology has negative prejudice on the each individual. With the mobility of Technology, people have become couch potato. In add, it is a big impact on the global market because the new machinery comes into the market filled with automatic, therefore it is a big disadvantage for labour works and it has a herculean task to find a new jobs. On the other side, without the cell phone children cannot run a few steps that can be very damage of their mind.

In conclude, it can say that the issue of Science and Technology go hand in hand and Technology has played an inevitable role in our journey of life.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'interred'.
Suggestion: interred
...nates the human life today. It has been inter woven in our routine life, there is a d...
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Line 3, column 47, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'affected'.
Suggestion: affected
...tary, modern technology has drastically affect the way of Living. In the past time, so...
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Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...ically affect the way of Living. In the past time, some people were very trouble to makes...
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Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nvenient in recent year by virtue of the microwave. Secondly, it has a big improv...
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Line 3, column 408, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...on, the trains has completely different than before period as a lot of AC coach avai...
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Line 3, column 430, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun AC seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of (AC)'.
Suggestion: a lot of (AC)
...pletely different than before period as a lot of AC coach available in the trains which is ...
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Line 3, column 481, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'provided'.
Suggestion: provided
... coach available in the trains which is provide a lot of facilities and people can cut ...
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Line 5, column 304, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rding to me this day is a student do not go to school during lockdown but they di...
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Line 5, column 348, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'study'
Suggestion: study
... to school during lockdown but they did studying online which can change their future l...
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Line 5, column 356, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ol during lockdown but they did studying online which can change their future lif...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ne which can change their future life. On the other hand, modern technology has...
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Line 7, column 136, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...bility of Technology, people have become couch potato. In add, it is a big impact...
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Line 7, column 365, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'job'?
Suggestion: job
...d it has a herculean task to find a new jobs. On the other side, without the cell ph...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79824561404 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76669534386 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570175438596 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7158191616 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5294117647 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1176470588 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88235294118 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236652593683 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711408329773 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575453541525 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128191268705 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597552497297 0.056905535591 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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