Inhabitants are thinking, development of internet brings people very near than before. Some inhabitants think society becomes lonely. Internet is very beneficial. Depends on the person. Internet does not know what to do. It works according to the instruction which you have to given it.
Furthermore, Due to the internet, the world becomes a global village. The Internet makes incredible changes in our lives. For instance, before you write a letter and post your relatives. Nowadays it becomes very fast through the internet. Also, you see your family and friends in video calls. Virtually attend any type of meeting. Check the physical health of your parents and children. So the internet is limitless. It provides the results according to your instruction. Contracting with each other is very easy. It also provides the facility to join anybody anywhere in the world virtually. The Internet provides a vital role in our lives.
On the other hand, there are other aspects of the internet, due to using of the internet we are neglecting Physical activities and our close relationship. We are close to online friends but going away from real-life friends. It also affects our health and relationship. For instance, web surfing hijacks us in different directions and consumes time scrolling irrelative things. So it makes a huge impact on our working area. Maybe we miss a big part of good habits getting from our family, elders, and friends. Social gathering is very important for learning different behaviours of humans their experiences and for generating a capability of good communication.
In my opinion, using the internet is necessary with some implementation of the rules. We should make a schedule for our free time and select the topics which are important for us and make a yearly personal development plan what piece of information we get from the internet and how it impacts ours lives.
- The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years 78
- Some people believe that the fast pace and stress of modern life is having a negative effect on families To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Some people believe that unpaid community services should be a compulsory part of high school programmes for example working for a charity improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children To what extend do you agree or disagree 56
- what is the causes and solutions of air pollution 56
- Writing task 1 People s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits 45
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'closer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: closer
...g, development of internet bring people more closer than before. Some inhabitants think soc...
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Line 1, column 194, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Internet
... very benificaly. Depends on the person.Internet doesnot know what to do. It works accor...
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Line 2, column 172, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...er and post your relatives. Nowadays it become very fast through internet. Also, you s...
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Line 2, column 260, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Virtually
... your family and friends in video calls.Virtually attend any type of metting. Check physi...
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Line 2, column 473, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...ontracting with each other is very easy.It also provides the facility to join anyb...
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Line 2, column 519, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...o provides the facility to join anybody an where in the world virtyaly. Internet p...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'There are another aspects'?
Suggestion: There are another aspects
...et provides a vitle role in our lives. There is another aspects of the internet, due to using of intern...
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Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effects'?
Suggestion: effects
...t going away from real friends. It also effect on our health specialy on our eyes. For...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19521912351 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90187016641 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621513944223 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.2975951904 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6153025277 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.6956521739 106.682146367 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.9130434783 20.7667163134 53% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.52173913043 7.06120827912 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 3.4128256513 469% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179323291981 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494141066598 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622531383484 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119402569294 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107256154902 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.7 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.1190380762 59% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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