Some people think everyone should be a vegetarian because we do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With the increasing engineered food products, more and more people become vegetarian in order to have a healthy diet. Some people argue that every individual has to become vegetarian because meat intake is unnecessary. Personally, I completely disagree with this statement with the following argument.
On the one hand, people who selected to be a vegetarian is caused by two primary reasons. To begin with, it is believed that, eating more vegetable in daily intake is good for people’s health. It is true that vegetables are far less chemical use than meat in food production program and sole eating vegetable may reduce the risk of some disease such as heart disease, diabetes and hypertension. Additional, some vegetarian reject to eat meat products due to they cannot stand on the animal killing. This sort of people not only themselves but also try to stop others to have a meat diet. Obviously, this campaign is not suitable for current society because all citizens have the rights to choose what they like or dislike.
On the other hand, meat intake is necessary and suitable for the human body. First of all, taking meat would generate more energy to deal with physical activities. For instance, red meat and white meat are content richer protein and fibre than vegetable which are essential components in human bodybuilding. Besides, there are some components sole exist in meat products. In other word, vegetables are the sole food resources for the vegetarian, though they have to take some chemical medicine in order to keep the body healthy.
In conclusion, although more vegetable intake is absolutely benefited to our healthy, no one can make a decision for other people about what they have to take. From my point of view, I strongly disagree every single person should be turning to a vegetarian.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, may, so, as to, for instance, in conclusion, sort of, such as, first of all, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08609271523 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67742414671 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572847682119 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6930818752 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252327356534 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888721853376 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446391759498 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163038022974 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440969371062 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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