Some people think that first impressions of an individual’s character are usually correct. Other people hesitate to judge a person on first meeting him or her, because they think first impressions are can be misleading. Compare these two views
These days an issue in associating over weather first impression is enough or not to judge somebody is going to be a public debate. This Issue will try to stand between both of sides, with some arguments.
In an agreeing side. There are some people who can judge a person from first impression. For example, Human resource department members. They must judge unemployment from one interview. It is why they placed first impression in high rank. It also works in curriculum vitae. The first look from our curriculum vitae leads reader to a single point view. This condition improves the capability of company to judge people from first impression and forces people to give best of him in the first time.
In an avoiding side. Although first look can lead a owner company in current feeling, a company still give training period. This period is a test for a prospective worker and his first appearance value. In fact, many workers usually fail in this time. It proves that the first impression is not usually can judge people effectively. To placed current value we need a longer process.
Overall, In my personality, we do not have to judge another person. In every condition, first, second or long time impression, we need to stay positive. Judging people is important to think internally but we cannot bring this opinion comes out. When people can feel our negative tease of somebody, it will pull out our bad communication. Thus, the point is not judging in first or second meeting. It is about how we can control our mind to stay positive to keep our good behavior.
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- Some people say that it is not good for children to grow up in the city and that the countryside is more suitable for them. Do you agree or disagree? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 51, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, look, second, so, still, thus, for example, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80147058824 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5710387107 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573529411765 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.486414804 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.3636363636 106.682146367 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.3636363636 20.7667163134 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.13636363636 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384800353956 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108308054648 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107298656829 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223683495307 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758378096065 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.67 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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