Some people think that genetically modified (GM) crops are a positive development. Others, however, argue that they are potentially dangerous.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Genetically modified crops cause controversy among the population whether they are healthy or harmful. I believe that is early to affirm that GM food is totally dangers free. This essay will discuss both views and state my own opinion.
Trying to optimize the production of food, genetic engineers have been working to modify seeds DNA to protect them against insects, climates problems like droughts and also to improve the quality of plants. All these points and others facilitate farmers to face many challenges during a growing season, to produce more food without using more soil, besides keeping food prices more consistent. These advantages make some people approve of the use of a genetic engineer.
On the other hand, a lot of research has been done to determine how GMOs impact human health. The findings point out no differences that implicate a higher risk to human health from these products, but there are no certainty zero risks. On the contrary, some studies relate a sort of illness to genetically modified food. As an example, the growing number of people allergic to milk or gluten, as well as the increase in cancer cases. These possibilities concern a part of the population that avoids consuming GMOs.
In conclusion, I personally tend to agree with these concerns. I think that while there may be great benefits to GM crops, overall there is no reassurance for the risks against human health. More long-term studies are necessary for avoiding an irreversible impact before spreading this innovation.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-10-18 | Andrea Marcondes | 61 | view |
- In the past, university students had to go to lectures because this was the only way to teach large numbers of people. Thanks to technology, students no longer need to be taught this way.To what extent do you agree? 73
- Some people think that genetically modified (GM) crops are a positive development. Others, however, argue that they are potentially dangerous.Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... both views and state my own opinion. Trying to optimize the production of foo...
^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...opulation that avoids consuming GMOs. In conclusion, I personally tend to agre...
^^^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...act before spreading this innovation.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, so, well, while, i think, in conclusion, sort of, as well as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.164 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6354506256 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5992749334 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3076923077 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159877541585 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599198921179 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664869617979 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101942847293 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860932041417 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.