Some people think that good health is very important to every person, so medical service should not be ran by profit-making companies. Do the advantages of private health care outweigh the disadvantages.
In contemporary world, opinions are divided whether health care should be or should not be managed and controlled by money makers. Though there are some drawbacks when profit-making corporations run the health systems, it is it is not to say that this phenomenon has no redeeming features.
On the one hand, several disadvantages when hospital are controlled by private owners can be seen. Because all men are created equal , healthcare should not be accessible to only the rich people. For instance, it is said that when the impoverished are not able to access the high-quality health services, the death rate of the nation is increased and the pandemics are more severe and contagious . Moreover, the gap between the rich and the poor will not be addressed fully if the indigent cannot pay for the fees . To be more specific, if all citizens in a country are subsidized part of the fees when consulting the doctors by government’s health insurances, the national authority not only mitigates the obstacles of people from disadvantaged backgrounds but also improves their life quality.
On the other hand, the benefits when the owners of the health services are profit-making companies are more significant. First of all, the more profit the private health systems make the more money they have to reinvest for buying up-to-date and advanced machines and tools, which augments the success rate of the operations. There are ample evidences from many private eye hospitals suggesting that the morbidity of the patients after the surgery has been reduced dramatically since they enforce the five-year program in altering the surgical instruments. Second of all, when paying more health care fees, the patients are given better health care. For example, in some developed countries such as America and Canada, when coming to the private clinics, the patients are provided with scrupulous examinations and consultancy from the doctors ,which enables the general practitioners to diagnose precisely.
In conclusion, hospitals managed and ran by private corporations have both positive and negative consequences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37237237237 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96971766363 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.5527084046 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.615384615 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6153846154 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23855094099 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897198626887 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565136856825 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146051109895 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669947525076 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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