It would be argued by some that the government is held accountable for people have a healthy diet. Others, however, believe that the responsibility of each individual.
On the one hand, there are a number of reasons why some believe that government officials are elected by the public, so they need to be obligated to take care of their citizens. The government could promote healthy eating. in addition, it has a follow food safety standards and requirements. We must pay various taxes on a monthly basis, so the government should use this money to encourage exercise and healthy diets. Government officials should make a web on the internet that allows to people have access to all the information about healthcare, health risks, food poisoning, or unhealthy eating habits. For example, when the people were well equipped with the necessary knowledge about basic healthcare, they would make healthier food choices.
On the other hand, I would argue that we should be held accountable for our own actions. If we become too reliant on the government for health, we should become dependent on our life. The government must address various problems such as national security, financial, army. If the government has taken care of each individuals' health, they can not time for the financial, development economics. Health is the most precious asset so we take full responsibility for our life.
in conclusion, people must be obligated to individual's health so the government does have not the duty to ensure its citizens have a balanced diet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09881422925 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84901558654 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541501976285 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7235578414 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1428571429 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240053936455 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889292211294 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890577188204 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198792128605 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102066000204 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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