Few are of the opinion that the sport's authority should stop encouraging dangerous sports whereas other believe that individual's should be given the choice of their interest.
There are various categories in sport's and some like boxing and racing involves higher risk to the lives of the participants. Sometimes they are unsure about coming out alive at the end of the game. Some loose their healthy and active body parts while playing such games and had to lead a miserable handicapped life throughout. This also affects the family and friends of the such candidates. When such incidents happen society also looses faith from other sports too and doesn't encourage it's growth.
But then higher risk involves higher achievements. Such games which require higher energy, practice and dedication are usually competed at a global level with enormous compensation and recognition worldwide. Those who are capable and wish to accomplish their dream should be given Freedom to choose their level of sports.
In my opinion, all kinds of sports should be encouraged and be provided with proper coaching, guidance and other safety precautions.
- The population of most cities is growing as people move to cities to find work and new opportunities. What problem does over population in cities cause? How can these problems be solved? 78
- Some people think that the government should ban all forms of dangerous sports; others believe that people should be free to make decisions for themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. （2011年7月30日A类） 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 33, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
Few are of the opinion that the sports authority should stop encouraging dang...
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Line 1, column 49, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of the opinion that the sports authority should stop encouraging dangerous sports...
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Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
... out alive at the end of the game. Some loose their healthy and active body parts whi...
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Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fects the family and friends of the such candidates. When such incidents happen s...
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Line 3, column 474, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... looses faith from other sports too and doesnt encourage its growth. But then highe...
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Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n are usually competed at a global level with enormous compensation and recogniti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, whereas, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 1615.20841683 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 181.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31491712707 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59601495996 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646408839779 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0741382043 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14792673912 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531778925238 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707729226339 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112973136611 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718922743904 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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