Some people think that the government should invest money in arts and cultural events, while others believe that the government should spend money on more important things. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Arts and cultural events depict a country’s heritage which the authorities must preserve. While some assert that the government must subsidise these forms, others argue that social issues need attention such as education and transport. From my perspective, the powers-that-be should promote artistic skills and affairs for conserving the traditions and improving the economy as well as they must consider developing other essential concerns.
One one hand, art enthusiast believe that the government must invest in unpopular art forms and affairs. One main reason is that several local art forms are vanishing rapidly from society. For example, Indian classical dance such as Bharatnatyam, Kuchipudi etc. are nearly on the verge of extinction and certainly needs funding to keep. Another significant reason is art such as dancing, painting and music are crucial for entertainment and television prospects. This art forms can be promoted to boost the economy of the country. For instance, Indian television show such as Indian Idol and Dance India Dance are exceedingly followed and viewed globally, thereby contributing to the financial growth of the country through digital media. Therefore, local bodies must protect these art forms as they represent the nation’s custom and earnings.
On the other hand, the opponents of art lover propose investment for social and economic problems like education and transport. Firstly, many developing countries are facing challenges to give the secondary school to people mainly residing in rural areas. Nonetheless, funds may be allocated by passing bills and budget should be reserved for development in education facilities. Secondly, road and rail facilities are inferior in some economies. Transport infrastructure unquestionably needs improvement for better connectivity to central cities. Consequently, these social predicaments are more crucial than art funding.
To sum up, in my opinion, even though the funding of artworks and functions are imperative to keep up the nation’s culture and prosperity, education and transport amenities need consistent advancement for the citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1839.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.78301886792 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03922805388 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603773584906 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.8277839083 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.166666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1111111111 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15455720864 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453386607627 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388066815909 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894883849167 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359914938853 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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