Some people think that government should subsidize fruits and vegetables to make healthy food cheaper. Others argue that tax should be set on unhealthy food. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, the increase in the consumption of unhealthy fast food has led to a rise in health related problems, and it is becoming a cause of concern in most countries. Some individuals opine that government should subsidize healthy foods, whereas others say that the solution is in levying a ‘Fat Tax’, which means a tax on fast food. This essay intends to delve into both perspectives. I, however, side with the former view.
The main argument in support of ‘Fat tax’ is that unhealthy food habits have led to an increase in health problems. The health of the general public is not only an i...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 291, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ers say that the solution is in levying a 'Fat Tax', which means a tax ...
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Line 2, column 144, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...e in health problems. The health of the general public is not only an individual's respon...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2299.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 460.0 315.596192385 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99782608696 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87218177808 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497826086957 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 710.1 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1215527564 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9090909091 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.31818181818 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326425905515 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914786229009 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872377369523 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201048343463 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062896838198 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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