Some people think that government, should subsidize fruits and vegetables lo make healthy food cheaper. Others argue that tax should be set on unhealthy food. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Having healthy citizens is a priority for every government in developing countries. Nevertheless, there is a debate regarding the most efficient way to encourage people to have good health. One group prefers to financially support healthy products; while, another opinion is to increase the taxes on junk food. From my perspective, it is everyone’s responsibility to take care of his health; however, the government should raise the taxes on fatty food.
On the one hand, the first group claims that lowering the prices of healthy food, such as fruits and vegetables, will likely encourage people to buy and eat them. There are many ways to offer such food at low prices. For example, the government could decrease the levy on many types of crops. Moreover, it can import essential vegetables from cheaper places through international agreements.
On the other hand, another perspective advice to impose a higher levy on the fast-food industry through what is called “fat-tax”. They believe that the fat tax would discourage people to buy such unhealthy food and, consequently, would buy vegetables and fruits. Thereafter, this will result in a decrease in the prevalence of obesity and other diseases such as diabetes and hypertension.
From my point of view, there are many risk factors, other than fatty food, that can lead to an unhealthy lifestyle such as sedentary life and alcohol drinking. I would prefer to encourage people to practise exercise and avoid smoking and alcohol rather than spending the money of taxpayers on supporting food. Moreover, the government can invest more money on building sporting centers with no membership fees.
To conclude, some people argue that we should support the sales of healthy food by providing them at low and affordable prices. Whereas, another group advises to impose a high fat tax. In my opinion, conducting a healthy life is multi-factorial and needs the cooperation of the people as well as the government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, well, whereas, while, for example, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26100628931 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99460407631 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553459119497 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6685144124 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4117647059 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7058823529 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.47058823529 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282498526297 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811199072019 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577112432954 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15517041822 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454493928127 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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