Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?
The government’s spending on artistic activities is receiving criticism since other fields are believed to be more justifiable options. Personally, I think that the national authority should support the arts financially if their budget allows so.
Regarding underprivileged nations, investing in artistic programmes might be an inappropriate choice for many reasons. Firstly, if a country is in a tragic situation, any encouragement of art is nonsense to its people until their basic requirements are fulfilled. For instance, the worryingly high inflation rate in Venezuela has redirected public attention from entertainment activities to fundamental living needs. Moreover, since the national budget of underdeveloped countries is quite limited, spendings on the arts might take away the valuable financial resources needed for other emergency problems such as the recent medical crisis caused by Covid 19.
However, given that not only does art bring about significant cultural and spiritual values but it also offers potential business opportunities, governments with abundant monetary resources should invest in the arts. In other words, by promoting art-related activities, the recreational needs of people would be met; thus improving their living quality. Also, artistic programmes and tourism would benefit from the government’s support since state donations could enhance the quality of art events, making them appealing to tourists. To exemplify, despite having no natural or historical heritage, Bat Trang village in Vietnam is still a famous tourist attraction thanks to its unique pottery-making art, which has long been facilitated by Vietnam’s government.
In conclusion, although the arts might be an unreasonable government spending in countries with a limited budget or emergency issues; generally, national authotiries should allocate money to artistic activities due to various benefits they bring about.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, thus, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.93906810036 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17740672005 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68458781362 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.5196763631 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.636363636 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6363636364 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140770857214 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521699591561 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332335171908 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902359739555 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029847850145 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.47 12.4159519038 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.82 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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