Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People hold different views about whether unsafe activities should be prohibited. While I accept that the authorities ought to respect civils’ rights, I believe that it is better to limit dangerous sports.
To begin with, it is true that some individuals argue those activities which do not seem safe to players must be limited to some extent. Firstly, those sports might have adverse effects on physical aspects of players. To illustrate, bungee jumping or skydiving as two well-known activities among adolescents are profoundly distructive. In other words, people who tend to try those types of sports are more likely to suffer from breaking or dislocating bones, secondly, regarding the huge number of injuries or casualties related to dangerous sport fields, it might impose high amount of medical care expenses on health sector’s shoulders in every country.
On the other hand, some people claim that every government is responsible to devote attention to human’s rights due to some reasons. First, individuals’ attitude should be respected by policy makers because every person has various ways of thinking. In addition, sportsmen who are working on a specific field might have spent majority of their time to become a professional player, hence the governments’ decision may destroy their lives, or they might suffer from mental diseases such as depression in the foreseeable future.
In conclusion, although someone thinks that authorities ought to consider people’s freedom, in my opinion, engaging in harmful sport activities should not be allowed by governments in order to reduce the number of physical injuries, and minimizing the proportion of the spent budget on medical care system.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55639097744 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01404367395 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65037593985 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.0735255222 49.4020404114 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.8 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 19.0 7.06120827912 269% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246247732883 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876682946452 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577946468167 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148790977589 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349104309319 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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