Some people think that governments should give financial support
to creative artists such as painters and musicians. Others believe
that creative artists should be funded by alternative sources.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
it would be argued by some people that participating in solo activities, like swimming, is preferable. In my opinion, however, it is more advantageous to participate in team sports, such as football.
On the one hand, there are a number of reasons why some people believe that taking part in solitary sports is more effective. The first reason is when at personal exercises, people will have a sense of ownership and responsibility, they would be free in choosing the time they do exercises. they might be doing exercises in the morning, in the afternoon, or after having dinner and any day of the week depending on their schedule. people can also choose the place they do sports, they could go to the sports center, the swimming pool, the park and ai their home. Another reason is people will have a chance to improve the weakness of each person, they will have a well-rounded fitness base that contributes to overall health.
On the other hand, I would argue that taking part in sports which are played in groups would be increasing teamwork skills and build strong relationships. Joining the group could be improving effective communication to solve problems, this experience is helpful when encountering problems at home or at work. team participation can boost self-esteem and confidence, being part of a team allows people to feel connected, receive recognition from a teammate or coach to show their viewpoint for their effort. The team can also teach me a lot of lessons about life, especially life isn't always fair, because there are always have unequal in all environments, so athletics have to accepted and practice more and more to achieve excellent performance in the future.
In conclusion, although some people think that is more beneficial while taking solely activities, I personally believe that participating in a team is more profitable.
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- Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams like football But others think taking part in individual sports is better like swimming Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
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- Some people think that governments should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians Others believe that creative artists should be funded by alternative sources Discuss both views and give your own opinion 67
- Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams like football But others think taking part in individual sports is better like swimming Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams like football But others think taking part in individual sports is better like swimming Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06168831169 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92261719411 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.4608006457 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.916666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0885511177459 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395260635872 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0265077691385 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0676021036958 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224323387331 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.