Some people think that hard working and determination are the key factors for being successful in the live, other people feel that other factors are important. Discuss both sides, what is your opinion?
In today's world, the key factors in attaining success remain a point of contention. While some believe that success is derived from perseverance and diligence, I contend that it also hinges on other crucial factors. this essay will analyze both opinions and give evidence for my viewpoint.
On the one hand, determination and perseverance are often the determinants of success. perseverance enables people to stay focused on their goals despite encountering many setbacks in life, contributing to one’s future success. Specifically, when individuals devote their time to pursuing their target, they will gain more experience and knowledge through their mistakes and minimize the possibility of repeating them in the future. A telling example of that is Thomas Edison who has failed more than 1,000 times before eventually managing to invent the light bulb. During the progress of his invention, he was not disheartened by the initial 1000 failures and took them as a learning experience to improve his shortcomings. Without being single-minded in the pursuit of his objective, he would have given up and could not have become a great inventor up to now.
On the other hand, it is believed that personal endeavor is not the sole indicator of success. Particularly, talent is another driving factor that can be attested to explain someone’s prosperity in society. For instance, it is empirically proven that no matter how many attempts somebody with a limited talent makes to succeed, they might struggle to outperform those with the endowment. Take Mozart who is a truly prodigious musician could compose a musical work at the age of 8 as an example, normal musicians with limited talent but hard work are never capable of succeeding like him. The reason for this is that success in the field of music depends largely on the creativity and inspiration of a musician’s innate ability which cannot be achieved only by tenacity.
To encapsulate, although persistence and determination play a pivotal role in the attainment of success, another factor such as inborn ability should be considered. Hence, the more flexibly you combine tenacity and talent, the more likely you are to succeed in the future.
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- Some people believe that success in life depends on hard work and determination while others believe that other factors like money and personal appearance are important Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
- Some people think that hard working and determination are the key factors for being successful in the live other people feel that other factors are important Discuss both sides what is your opinion 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, while, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1858.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2191011236 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92690159302 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623595505618 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7564699618 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.125 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212689942107 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633204410991 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489028979613 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121723211629 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564894069393 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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