One of the highly controversial issues today relates to that salary or friendly environment play the most important role when choosing workplace. While some people believe that wage is the most important element, some other feels that feeling comfortable at workplace is more important. From my personal experience, I believe that good atmosphere at work outweigh higher salary and possibly unfriendly environment. This essay will discuss both these views and support my opinion.
Almost three quarters of human live, people spent at work. Wage plays important role when choosing a job, nobody wanna be underpaid due to his education, experience or job description. As far as I agree with statement that salary is important, because it is the only way how to pay bills, leisure activities and more, friendly environment at the place, where average human being spent eight hours daily is more important. For instance, in my personal experience, when I used to work in Saudi Arabia, I have started as a nurse in VIP unit. Unfortunately, this workplace have been full-filled by stress and every co-worker shared his angriness with others; this lead me to change of the department, pay dropped, however, I have felt confident.
From the other hand, workplace and our workmates are like a second family we have. We share with them our happiness even sadness. Furthermore, they become our friends and part of our social life out of the work. Who else, should be closer to us than someone you spent most of your time. Some people might oppose, that escape from everyday's seemed faces at least for a weekends is huge relief, I disagree. The prime evidence to support my opinion is research from Oxford University in 2015, when more than ninety per cent of participants agreed that their colleagues become their long-life friends or they hang out with them quite often.
To sum up, as long as money rised from work are important, I believe that maintain good mental health and feel confident at the place where you spent most of the life is more important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, second, so, while, at least, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97965116279 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64242587045 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59011627907 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4403742609 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0625 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315456322853 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929893772464 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057792732732 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189272795406 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093062480745 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.