Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Many people think that organising an international sports tournament is beneficial for the country, while others believe that it is not good for the country. My piece of writing will discuss that how it is important to host a international sport event before reaching to an appropriate conclusion.
In one hand, organising international tournaments can motivate youngsters to showcase their talent to the whole world. Whereas, international sport events can also work as talent hunt because a lot of teenagers will show their talents by participating in group of activities which can encourage and motivate them to show their talent worldwide with the help of these events, for instance, Olympic organisation host many events to help youngsters to showcase their talent on a international level.
On the other hand, hosting many international events can effect the financial state of a country which is not beneficial for the country development. Whereas, government can help people by providing them necessary jobs which can help them to make their and their families future bright, for example, government can start a scheme to give jobs to the people who need jobs for the sake of themselves and their family rather than organising international sports events.
In conclusion, hosting sports programme help young talent to gain popularity in the whole world with international tournaments and make their country proud of themselves. Whereas, government can also provide jobs to the unemployed youth rather than spending too much money on sports programmes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... youngsters to showcase their talent on a international level. On the other hand...
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Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...make their country proud of themselves. Whereas, government can also provide jobs to th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37959183673 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01161433586 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497959183673 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.9559474416 49.4020404114 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.75 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.625 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.625 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235003450788 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125042148198 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882990924054 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168721401821 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107956688755 0.056905535591 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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