Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
People have different views about the benefits and drawbacks of hosting a worldwide sports event. From my point of view, it might be a profitable decision for the organizing country in general.
On the one hand, there are several reasons that why people believe that there is no good when holding an international sports event. It requires the government to pour a large amount of money into constructing numerous infrastructure facilities such as huge capacity stadiums and transportation systems while the event takes place only approximately a month. Therefore, these could cause a budget deficit for the host nation, particularly the developing countries. Furthermore, there is an overload on collecting and treating the garbage through the time holding the sports activities because the consumption of fast food and take away drinks of an enormous number of spectators exceed the size of waste containers in the stadium.
On the other hand, organizing a universal athletic event could bring various benefits in terms of economic. First, incomes from tourism can go up considerably thanks to sports fans who went exploring, traveling in a time without happening tournaments. Also, it may be an ideal destination for these tourists to take a holiday next time. Second, this is a fantastic opportunity to promote the country's image widely around the world. As a result, the country could be received investment from overseas investors for various projects in the future.
In conclusion, while there are some reasons to believe that holding a global sports event only brings the bad things to the host nation, my own view is that the good ones are much more tremendous than ever.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ts and drawbacks of hosting a worldwide sports event. From my point of view, it might ...
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Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'sport'.
Suggestion: sport
...ourism can go up considerably thanks to sports fans who went exploring, traveling in a...
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Line 7, column 78, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...easons to believe that holding a global sports event only brings the bad things to the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, in general, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21323529412 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87753761937 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3234003023 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.166666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272583706896 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894274508761 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719825877274 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166865855408 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529817091372 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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