Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
When discussing the hosting country for an international sports event, some people might think that is a great opportunity for that country, while others deny it. In my point of view, while both sides have their own reasons, I believe that hosting an international sports event is a great opportunity for any country to get it.
On the one hand, having a chance to be the host of an international event means having an opportunity to show the world that country. The hosting country can use that advantage to attract more tourists, advertise its beauty to the world. It can also pull many companies or investors to contribute to the economy through the image it shows in that event.
On the other hand, great benefits come along with great responsibilities. To be chosen as a host country, that country needs to guarantee the profession, facilities, securities, etc. Without those requirements, it is very risky to let that country organize such a huge event, especially a sports event.
In my perspective of thinking, being a host for an international sports event is a one-in-a-time opportunity. Take an example in my country, Vietnam. Vietnam had a chance to host the ASEAN Sports Events in 2019, which is a great opportunity for us to show the world our country through social media and many campaigns of that events. It was obvious that we had to make sure about the facility, the Sports Centre is big enough for the audiences as well as the security and comfort for athletes. Thanks to that, more people know and come to our country after the events, as well as more opportunities provided by many companies and businesses around the world.
In general, being chosen to be the host of an international sports event can be an advantage, leverage or a huge challenge to any country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, well, while, in general, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84090909091 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88484759975 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483766233766 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1755477889 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277015434752 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105240661842 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950703954731 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164621365253 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111987113203 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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