Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
It is an argument that there are many benefits for the country hosting international sports, while the others think it is bad. I agree with those who believe that it helps to develop the host nation in long term.
On the one hand, there are many reasons that hosting international sports events can cause some disadvantages. Firstly, the country, holding a big event like international sports event can waste the amount of public money, whereas, they can spend on hospitals, building more schools and a welfare state to help the poor. For instance, to organize Olympic Games, the host nation has to spend a huge amount of money on building stadiums, which leads to a major debt after the Olympics for some countries. Secondly, revenue is brought from the organization may also be lower than the cost because an opportunity to make money is just for hotels, restaurants, and businesses related to sports.
On the other hand, I support the argument that there are still bring some benefits to developing the country through the organization. As can be seen, this is an opportunity for the economy of the host nation to develop. Therefore, tourism, hospitality, and business can be taken advantage of sports fans from all over the world coming to attend and cheer for matches of their country’s teams. Moreover, the host country can use all stadiums which are built for sports events as tourist attractions, and those stadiums where can become a place for athletes in the country use to practice for the upcoming sports events.
In conclusion, only a few drawbacks to holding an international sports event, besides there are still bringing a lot of benefits for the host nation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'brought'.
Suggestion: brought
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ome a place for athletes in the country use to practice for the upcoming sports eve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, whereas, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94699646643 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71309528294 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540636042403 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.5313895902 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.272727273 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7272727273 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0909090909 7.06120827912 200% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296031259985 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123346370459 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787290887946 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191233264304 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268069174069 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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