Some people think that hosting international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Sports entertainment is one of the industries that generate a huge amount of revenue for the country. Whether it is soccer in the United States or Cricket in Indian subcontinent, the amount of audience is colossal. While some people see such sports events to be fruitful for the country, others find it to be more detrimental than beneficial. The essay will scrutinize both the aspects before venturing a conclusion, followed by personal opinion.
Given the mass fan-following of sports stars, people from all around the world travel to a common destination to watch their favourite player be victorious. Consequently, the country’s economy rises with leaps and bounds because such events get global media coverage and sponsorships. Moreover, the audience and participants reach the venue well in advance and enjoy the local facilities such as hotels and other attractions, which give a boost to the tourism industry of the hosting nation.
While there are obvious fiscal benefits of sports events to the country, there are some adverse environmental effects. The aftermath of such events does not get enough attention over the global media. Although these events create a jolly environment around the city, the local people suffer as a result of littering and pollution. The denizens have to deal with the consequent situation and it takes a while to get back to normal as happened in Tokyo after 2021 Olympics.
Summing up, there are pros and cons to a country hosting a global event. While the government enjoys the revenue, they should not forget about the citizens. So, I opine that there should be a balance between all factors such that the hazards are minimised and the pros are enjoyed with the collaborative efforts of authorities and the locals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 431, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, moreover, so, well, while, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13888888889 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78218400533 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590277777778 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9994484239 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.714285714 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22526503341 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704669960879 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583948302609 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126569125303 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560117945261 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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