Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
As sport soon gain it's place in human life, internation sports events rose simultaneously. In the past few years, sports events has become one of the most vibrant and uproarious competition of all time. Many agree that large international sports events may boost the country's development, but some think it is unbeneficial. This essay will consider both views and raise an opinion about the statement.
To begin, one can not deny that a international sports event is a big impulse on the country's growth. Big events interest enormous amount of tourists and fans who flock to host countries to cheer and support their home team. This facilitates natives to sell their products of advetise their business to foreigners. Industry such as hotel or restaurent will be welcoming enormous groups of guest as well as gain much profit. The country's culture and cuisine will be embraced worldwide. Not only will it make a huge profit for the host country but it also creates a good impression of the people and the environment. This brings potential business and future profits for the host country.
In contrast, such events can have many drawbacks and problems. Large amount of tourists arriving means that more vehicles are going to run on streets and roads causing troublesome traffic jams in many countries such as Vietnam. Also, more trash and detrimental substances will be thrown into the environment leading to harmful polution. Another drawback is that in some situations, tourists will have uncomftable experiences and have bad impression of their trip. Such adversement can leave a bad mark and affect on the country's image.
The way I consider is that the merits totally outweigh the drawback. Such drawback can be improved and eliminated with well preparation and awareness of the natives and every nation should welcome any sports event if they have the needed resources and capability.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ves and every nation should welcome any sports event if they have the needed resources...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, in contrast, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13225806452 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7546366172 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583870967742 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8033718389 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3888888889 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186482697462 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574343636425 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524939441306 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105773505306 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624344217489 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.