Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals .Do you agree or disagree with this point of view ? Why or why not ? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this modern era , necessities are fairly important for human to live a long life with the availability of all mandatory provisions but the field areas , accommodation as well as industry needs are the significant part of human rather than saving area for endangered animals. The agree points of given statement are being analyzed in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, growing number of population are having to suffer from starvation especially poor people have to manage their meals with complicated way . Therefore, farm lands are very essential for the production of crops to fulfill their needs as well as most of the masses have no shelter because they are unable to buy a new house or to take an apartment for rent due to lack of money . Hence , these lands should be used to built houses for those people with the help of government.
Further more , a lot of people are very literate with great qualification and they are capable to work in an every field of work with full of concentration but the jobs have become a serious issue for them .So if the industries are built for giving an employment to such kind of intellectual people then the variations are feasible in the evolution of country as well as poor inhabitants will get an employment to cover their household expenses.
In the nutshell , humans are entitled for this priority of land as compared with animals because they are the significant creatures of god as well as the humans are capable to manage the things on earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, then, therefore, well, kind of, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81395348837 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72164170505 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581395348837 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.919747046 49.4020404114 235% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 177.428571429 106.682146367 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.8571428571 20.7667163134 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284709141507 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130754421087 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595520769715 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171635728718 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463793071637 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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