Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent your agree or disagree.
Recent years have witnessed more consequences influencing global warming, which draw attention to not only almost all environmentalists but also large numbers of humans all over the world. Although some people argue that humans should try to live with it, I firmly believe that humans should try to decline its influences in our environment.
It is extremely difficult to live with influences causing global change. First, these changes influence living spaces in various fields which also have been affecting directly humans life. Take storm as an example, a significant increase in the number of storms in the latest decade along the Vietnam coast is a cause of changing crops and also the quality of agriculture there. Second, these influences have been difficult to forecast and control. For example, the direction’s storm recently has diverted constantly and much faster than it used to. Therefore, it could sweep away and could ruin the local areas before having a forecast.
However, prevention would become much easier and might be more beneficial for our economy. First, the main reason of this situation cause human activities. Therefore, individuals should raise their awareness of using natural resources, protecting woodlands, and reducing deforestations. For example, by explanation green areas, if governments encourage their citizen to grow more trees not only along the street but also their house, it would be expanded both in the countryside and the city. Second, great prevention means that there are fewer cost losses to redress the natural environments which are under threat by humans. For example, desertification has been a serious problem causing deforestation and also the main factor of global warming. By growing plants, governments would have to pay a huge amount of money for bringing it back. In conclusion, global warming has been becoming a vital issue. As long as, both governments and individuals should have a high responsibility to prevent negative effects causing environmental problems before becoming worse.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4670846395 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89733870892 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605015673981 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7030958884 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.588235294 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7647058824 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23529411765 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0688201562572 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0221973573759 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323892823921 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0425605687851 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020757205261 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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