It is recognized by some that climate change is an inevitable matter and it is nearly impossible to overcome it instead it is far better to set a solution to just deal with this issue.I would partly support this assertion as I'm more of the opinion that althought we are not able to control every natural cause of climate change we can definitely clear up some of the reasons of this phenomenon thar are strongly related to human.
To commence with,let me put a light on the ideology which is highly believed by some.In fact this group of people hold this belief that on the accounting some reasons climate change is an uncontrolable subject.Consequently ,individuals all around this vast land are supposed to seek a neat way to just keep living with it.I support their viewpoints to some extend because I highly think there are countless of causes which are related to our ecosystem cycle and they can put our cilmate in various conversions.these aforementioned sources are not really in hand of humans to curb.as a result ,finding a technical route to deal with this subject appeals an effective plan to follow.
Despite some conspiciouse factors on the subject of cilmate change which make it absolutely unreachable to deal such as natural conversions on our environment ,it seems more logical to me if humsn just stop doing their unsustainable activities or using more energy efficient products, they can easily enjoy their lives free of reapetedly climate changes with adverse impacts on our invaluable earth. Moreover ,it is needless to say that how global warming is strongly linked to climate change and it is completely palpable that Co2 emissions and other human's harmful activities are the direct result of growing global warming.To put it more simply, we human shouldn't be surprised by climate change if we just keep doing our deleterious doings.I agree to tackle this issue government ought to take step and mitigate the detrimental effect of some human activities which have are unhealthy for our green environment by justpassing some environment friendly strict rules.
By way of conclusion, I believe human do not have this ability to manage every single reason of climate change,nonetheless It is possible for us to curb some detrimental activities which are totally done by human to decline unfavorable results of climate change through our precious world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, moreover, nonetheless, really, so, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1991.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07908163265 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93817201676 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540816326531 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 641.7 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 78.0 20.2975951904 384% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 136.789473279 49.4020404114 277% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 398.2 106.682146367 373% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 78.4 20.7667163134 378% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.4 7.06120827912 232% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250174262106 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144474368596 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0201069839471 0.0667982634062 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1579264237 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184189591714 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.7 13.0946893788 318% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -7.69 50.2224549098 -15% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.7 11.3001002004 298% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.37 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.61 8.58950901804 135% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 33.2 10.1190380762 328% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 34.0 10.7795591182 315% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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